Sunday, February 05, 2012

Haiku


So basically, I'm sitting here with a friend. And she says that I should take my ergonomically designed poem Wash (http://aplaceformypoetry.blogspot.com/2012/02/wash.html) and turn it into a haiku... so I did. Her reasoning was that if I were to be a part of a creative writing class, I would be told by my lecturer that I should condense my poem down into a haiku, containing the same amount of meaning, but with fewer words.

Ship sank. Bugger it!
Lost everything. Fishies! Lol!
I really don't care.

Then she wrote this:

I'm sitting with friend
"Turn poem to haiku," She said.
So I did, and LOL!

-o0o-

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